Talofa Lava Samson, It's your best friend Avei I'd like to say that is one great Bio Poem. But the feedback that I have for you is to make sure that you go back and check because you may not see your mistakes. But anyway it was one very good Bio Poem.
Hi Samson I'm Dhananjay I saw your bio poem. What I liked About your poem was that how you told what happens in you family and used lots of adjectives.It reminds me about my family. Next time you can check your capital letters. Bye
Hey Samson, I'm Losalio, I was going through your class blog and I ended up seeing your blog. Something that I liked was that you said that you were a funny person, the reason why I liked that was because I always laugh with my friends because they are crack up. Something that I also enjoyed doing was reading it all because when you said that you fear going on a stage and when your parents argue. I get that feeling too because my parents are Tongan. Something that you could do better next time is go back and check you mistakes.
Hey Samson, My Name's is Niel. I was scrolling doing your page and saw your bio poem funny thing that I like poems, I like your poem of how you wanting to be a rich ruby player. I want to be rich too, the reason why because I would love to get all the game in the world. One thing next time you should reread your good work and check your mistakes. keep it up.
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ReplyDeleteTalofa Lava Samson, It's your best friend Avei I'd like to say that is one great Bio Poem. But the feedback that I have for you is to make sure that you go back and check because you may not see your mistakes. But anyway it was one very good Bio Poem.
ReplyDeleteHi Samson I'm Dhananjay I saw your bio poem. What I liked About your poem was that how you told what happens in you family and used lots of adjectives.It reminds me about my family. Next time you can check your capital letters.
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Hey Samson,
ReplyDeleteI'm Losalio, I was going through your class blog and I ended up seeing your blog. Something that I liked was that you said that you were a funny person, the reason why I liked that was because I always laugh with my friends because they are crack up. Something that I also enjoyed doing was reading it all because when you said that you fear going on a stage and when your parents argue. I get that feeling too because my parents are Tongan. Something that you could do better next time is go back and check you mistakes.
Hey Samson,
ReplyDeleteMy Name's is Niel. I was scrolling doing your page and saw your bio poem
funny thing that I like poems, I like your poem of how you wanting to be a rich ruby player. I want to be rich too, the reason why because I would love to get all the game in the world. One thing next time you should reread your good work and check your mistakes. keep it up.
kind regards Niel